Most of you already know of my character "Claws". Yes, I know you said I was spamming, and I agree I was. This time, I'm only making this one topic for Claws. I have completely changed the story to something new and more exciting. Here's the new story for the ride.
Guests enter Sunshine City, a city overrun by crime. After a walk through Sunshine City Park, guests enter the city sewer systems which takes guests to the surreal world of "Otherworld" that exists under Sunshine City. Guests enter the laboratory of Claws, an inventor who is the head of the "League Of Inventors" a group of inventors that consits of aliens, creatures, and other life forms that all love to invent things. Claws welcomes his new assistants (guests) but suddenly Fangs, a female evil vampire hacks into the pre show telling Claws and the guests to not get in her way of taking over Otherworld. Guests then hop into their "L.O.I. ROVERS" (Ride trains) created by Claws himself and will launch into pitch darkness with a new danger around every turn. The ride will feature effects like mist, fire, strobe lights, sound effects, and props to create a thrilling indoor/in the dark coaster adventure. Will you stop Fangs in time?
The ride will be based off of the story that I am sending to Tim Burton to be made into a film. I think the ride should be in Movietown because the only rides there now are two Batman themed rides. I think the stunt show should be taken down and replaced with "Claws Coaster" because the stunt show just sits there now and does not feature any new shows. Let me know what you think of the new Claws story.